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LYRICS-competition

Topic started by Ramki (@ pm062-01.spindler.wmich.edu) on Tue Nov 24 16:38:22 EST 1998.
All times in EST +10:30 for IST.

Time to have some more fun?
What is this lyrics potti huh?Well we have all been witnessing the hidden talents of many of our DFers in the lyrics area. So i decided why dont we
have a small competition in terms of lyrics.
What we need to do?
I will give a popular tune and explain the situation for which this particular song was written. All you have to do is come out with entirely different lyrics(but it should be apt for that particular situation).You should write atleast one pallavi and one charanam. Do not use
English words and please refrain from vulgarity(we have many kavignars in Tamil cine world for that). Whoever comes out with the best set will be
selected as the winner.(the winner will be selected on the basis of nadai, content and tamizh usage)
Who will select the winner??Its going to me(hehehe-easy job:))and Rajaraman.
The winner will be given the responsibility to chose the next tune(only the next) and situation and he will join the panel of judes(!!)to select the next winner.
We invite all of you to join the fun and expose your hidden talents to world of TFM fans:)
Do it now:)

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Responses:

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• From: NN (@ proxyhard.idirect.com) on: Thu Mar 18 14:15:49 EST 1999
  
  Somebody please tell me the situation, and when is the deadline official??
  
  
• From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu) on: Fri Mar 19 17:00:08 EST 1999
  
  NN, we no longer have a deadline/competition, the current song in "nee paathi naan paathi kanne" from keladi kanmani.. please feel free to post any time u want;-)
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ ) on: Thu Mar 25 22:08:49 EST 1999
  
  for nee paathi naan paathi pennae
  
  nee pulli naan koadu anbae
  kalandhu
  varaindhaalthaan koalamenum vaazhvae
  
  eruvai urutti koalaththin mael
  poosanip poo soottum azhagae
  pulliyitta maan en varigalukkadangi
  pallivarum naal ennaaloa
  andhapuraththil nee vandhadhum
  tharuvaen pulli vivaram vaaraayoa
  nee vaa vaa
  (nee pulli...
  
  
  
  
• From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu) on: Fri Mar 26 10:11:37 EST 1999
  
  udhaya: nice one!
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Fri Mar 26 13:09:05 EST 1999
  
  aahh, I thought I could slip a bawdy line in there, censor working overtime?
  
  thanks, bb.
  
  
• From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu) on: Fri Mar 26 14:28:03 EST 1999
  
  yes, udhaya, ravi on the prowl!! that was a nice one too:-))))))
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Mon Mar 29 18:17:37 EST 1999
  
  Guys,
  How about making "Oh paappaa laali" from Idhayaththai Thirudaathae our next song? Vaali makes this song sound so obviously like a dubbing song. Can't we do better?
  
  
• From: Babu (@ 198.153.135.42) on: Tue Mar 30 10:18:32 EST 1999
  
  
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• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Tue Mar 30 13:41:25 EST 1999
  
  Babu,
  That just plain knocked me out, man. Bravo!
  
  
• From: MS (@ 129.252.22.112) on: Tue Mar 30 16:10:18 EST 1999
  
  Babu, fabulous. Just a suggestion. the last line has an unfitting "sandham". I feel if it is "adhikAlaiyil varum sooriyan nambi nee unangaai" it suits the sandham better
  
  
• From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42) on: Tue Mar 30 17:50:53 EST 1999
  
  Thanks Udhaya, MS.
  
  MS, you are right, I too noticed a slight sandhan shift in the last line.
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Tue Mar 30 18:49:45 EST 1999
  
  for oh paapaa laali
  
  poongaatril jothi
  ennil nee paathi
  puyalukkenna neethi
  veesumoa enai meeri
  
  poongaatril jothi�
  
  naal virayamaai kidanthathae saerum munnarae
  kaalaththin koalaththai kaeladi
  yen iruttarai vaanilae velichcha raegaiyaai
  udhiththaval neeyadi
  thalaisaayum munn manam saerthida nee vaasapaththiyoa
  unai aendhidum indha aanmagan nilai thaeyum varththiyoa
  vaadum jothigal nammaich chaerthida avan noi koduththaanae
  
  
• From: bb (@ schubert.crhc.uiuc.edu) on: Wed Mar 31 00:33:26 EST 1999
  
  udhaya, babu, good ones.
  babu, ur language usage is amazing! (of course, this is not the first time i am blown over by u:-)) )
  udhaya, 'yen iruttarai vaanilae velichcha raegaiyaai udhiththaval neeyadi ' zeroes in on the situation!
  
  
• From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42) on: Wed Mar 31 09:07:52 EST 1999
  
  Thanks balaji, that is a very nice compliment :-))
  
  Udhaya Good one.
  
  
• From: chandy (@ 209.125.83.228) on: Wed Mar 31 12:18:53 EST 1999
  
  Babu, an excellent one! IMO, beats the original too:)
  
  Udaya, good one too
  
  
• From: cram (@ 206.103.12.102) on: Fri Apr 2 08:26:02 EST 1999
  
  ponmaalaip poovE
  aaraaro anbE
  solvathen nenjE
  kaathalE nimmadhi
  
  En Olamaay ezundhadhu un raagamE
  thanimaiyin vEdhanai theerumO
  O vaanilE alaindhidum oR mEgamE
  thaviththidum nilamthanai theendumO
  
  oomai nenjinil pongum sOgam
  iru kaNgaLil padiththEN
  aNaithaandidum unthan Ekkam
  iru kaigaLaal thaduppEn
  sellum maalaiyil varum kaalaiyilum
  ini naan nizhalE
  
  
• From: bb (@ franck.crhc.uiuc.edu) on: Sat Apr 3 16:22:05 EST 1999
  
  good one, cram, the first stanza stands out!
  
  
• From: cram (@ 206.103.12.102) on: Mon Apr 5 07:06:07 EDT 1999
  
  thanx buddy,
  enna yaaraiyumE kaaNOm?
  
  
• From: chandy (@ 209.125.83.228) on: Mon Apr 5 10:07:38 EDT 1999
  
  cram,
  
  Good one! the lines
  
  "oomai nenjinil pongum sOgam
  iru kaNgaLil padiththEN"
  
  were very good!
  
  
  
• From: cram (@ 206.103.12.102) on: Fri Apr 9 11:56:06 EDT 1999
  
  thanx chandy,
  enna brothers, aduththa paattukkup pOgalamaa?
  
  
  
• From: Ramki (@ pm062-22.spindler.wmich.edu) on: Fri Apr 9 16:43:44 EDT 1999
  
  What About 'thaalattudhe vaanam' from 'kadal meengal'.(an excellent tune but bad lyrics-IMO(by kannadasan))
  
  
• From: babu (@ 198.153.135.42) on: Fri Apr 9 18:14:05 EDT 1999
  
  yeah, ramki you are right - awful lyrics for a beautiful tune.
  
  
• From: cram (@ 206.103.12.102) on: Sat Apr 10 05:26:08 EDT 1999
  
  babu, ramki,
  i am surprised u think it had bad lyrics.
  i mean..
  "sorgaththilE idhu mudivaanathu
  sorgamendRE idhu mudivaanathu"
  were pretty good lines
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ ) on: Fri May 21 16:43:13 EDT 1999
  
  for Thaalaattuthae Vaanam
  
  reengaaramaai oadam
  alaimodhidum raagam
  
  tholaivinilae
  varaipadamaai
  sendhoorach chooriyan
  saayum ponnaana kaalamae
  
  reengaaramaai. . .
  
  valai veesum boodhum kadal thaymael undu paasam
  udal moochchu yaavum aval poatta pichchaiyaagum
  
  meenukku vandhadhu vinaiyaanathu
  valaikkullae vizhundhu nam vaazvaanadhu
  vaazhum ondru thaeyum ondru vaguththaan neethi andru
  
  reengaaramaai oadam
  alaimodhidum raagam
  
  tholaivinilae
  varaipadamaai
  sendhoorach chooriyan
  
  saayum ponnaana kaalamae
  
  
• From: aruvi (@ spc-isp-tor-uas-82-56.sprint.ca) on: Fri May 21 19:05:30 EDT 1999
  
  UdhayaJIIIII!!!
  
  kalakeedinga! super! manasa thodudinka ponga. Aruvi-a sirichudirinthean. Ipo ungal thathuvam en kannil irunthu aruvi vara panniduthu...neengal vairamuthu-vukku pOdiyya. Aamaamm...pOna jenmathil neengal meenavaraa?:-))
  
  It was really nice,touching. Keep up the good work.
  
  
  
• From: neruppu (@ beecher14.bch.uc.edu) on: Fri May 21 21:14:37 EDT 1999
  
  Udhaya, wow! nice lyrics. Aruvi, udhaya pona jenmaththile meenavar illa. meena irundhirupparo?
  
  
• From: aruvi (@ spc-isp-tor-uas-73-20.sprint.ca) on: Fri May 21 21:19:49 EDT 1999
  
  yaar, antha rajni padankalila nadithaarE, avara?
  
  
• From: bb (@ compq1.crhc.uiuc.edu) on: Sat May 22 23:46:48 EDT 1999
  
  that was a good one, udhaya, thanks for reviving this thread:)))
  
  
• From: Kamesh (@ hlr-42-114.tm.net.my) on: Wed May 26 02:33:11 EDT 1999
  
  Adutha paattu enna sollungappa. Or shal I suggest
  "Ennavalae adi Ennavalae en idhayathai" (Kadhalan)
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Thu May 27 14:51:47 EDT 1999
  
  Kamesh,
  Murali Shankar did an amazing job rewriting "Ennavalae" that I feel obliged to repost it here from the short-lived, "If you were the lyricist" thread.
  
  From: Murali Sankar (@ 129.252.26.37) on: Sat Nov 14 01:24:17 EST 1998
  
  
  I think I will place a few points regarding the above point. I do not know if they will be appreciated. In fact after hearing
  "ennavaley" I felt a bit annoyed about the line "kumbittu kannadippaen". Hence I preffered to change the entire song by myself
  (only for my satisfaction). The fully rewritten song goes as follows:
  
  "Manjariyey adi sundhariyey unnai anudhinam kandiduvaen
  kunjariyey ezhil poochchoriyum undhal koondhalai theendiduvaen
  Undhan selaiyiley pugum thendralidam rou seydhiyai cholli vaippaen
  En paattiniley varum raagathiley oru pudhumayum seydhu vaippaen - sezhum
  Kaattiniley ulla nalmayil pondra un aattaththil manam layippaen"
  
  "Vanji un koondhalil vandhidum vaasaththil kannayarndhurangiduvaen
  vanjira meeninai poondra un kanngalum thunjida ithazh padhippaen
  konjidum kaigalai nenjinil serthunai manjaththil veezhthiduvaen
  thunjidum velayil thugilinai kalaindhu un mugaththinil mugam padhippaen
  
  en kaadhali !paaradi!
  idayinil yaazhisaippaen
  en kannmani!sugam tharum ponmani!
  iravinil unai anaippaen!
  
  (Manjariyey)
  
  Kaadhaliyey unai kaana "e"yandridin kaatrinil karaindhiduvaen
  Mohiniyey un azhaginukkey oru oviyum varaindhiduvaen
  kadalalai pondru un kavinmigu kaalgalai theendiyae magizhndhiduvaen
  kodiyenappadarnthu nee meniyai thazhuvida sugamathil amizhndhiduvaen
  
  (ilakkiya censor)
  
  Naam seyrvadhaal, soarvadhaal
  sorgamum theriyudhadi
  Naam vaazhvadhaal vazhndhu veezhvadhaal
  unnmayum puriyudhadi.
  
  (Manjariyey)"
  
  
  That is all. hope that is very revealing. Any takers ?
  
  Murali Sankar
  
  
• From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on: Tue Jun 1 16:54:05 EDT 1999
  
  All right! If no one else is going to dare to participate then I got another sacrilege to perform. This time it is "Pani Vizhum Malarvanam".
  
  for Panivizhum Malarvanam
  
  pazhamuthirch choalayoa
  malaraendhum oadayoa
  soadhanai seiyyavoa
  sandhaegam theerumoa
  
  pazhamuthirch choalayoa
  malaraendhum oadayoa
  
  maatham saetham marukkaathae
  varudam thaeya varuthaathae
  kurukuru paarvaiyil malar idazhgal panindhida
  valarndhidum aasaiyil en iravugal nanaindhida
  
  saelai idaiveli idaiyinil enakkena irukkayil
  viralgal pathiththu karaigal akatrath thoondum
  
  pazhamuthirch choalayoa
  malaraendhum oadayoa
  soadhanai seiyyavoa
  sandhaegam theerumoa
  
  paalai mazhai poal pozhivaayoa
  vaazhai udalaal izhaivaayoa
  pirindhidum pozhuthelaam naan iyangidum iyandhiram
  unnudan kalandhadhum uyir sudarvidum sudhandhiram
  
  maalaik karukkalum mayakkida nilavoli surandhida
  iravin madiyil iruvar aadum oonjal
  
  pazhamuthirch choalayoa
  malaraendhum oadayoa
  soadhanai seiyyavoa
  sandhaegam theerumoa
  
  

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