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9th December 2006, 01:26 AM
#11
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Hey Chevy,
ok wow that was weird cause that whole rant about environmental issues is like the silent one that runs through my head...it is survival of the fittest..it's harder still when you realize that it is and well you ain't doing that well a job...anyways that moment with the blind woman and bus....so real!!! your character is not a hero....he's real, he thinks like a real person does...it's not cliched or ideal or even sensical but that is the best attempt to capture the everyday....uh yeah i should join your protagonist in rants eh? Except i would like to sit in the bus rather than hang from it :P
i want to know how a female protagonist would be under your guiding hand?
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9th December 2006 01:26 AM
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9th December 2006, 11:28 AM
#12
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Originally Posted by
sipi
nice story chevy... it remembers my college day... twice or thrice, i travelled in 29c and nearly 2 stops, have to foot on the steps... uhuhuuuu!!!!!
the concept of the story is very nice... and this story shows, u have the knowledge in geography too
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(this concept is little differ from you another story, this is chennai after all... but, oru boy oda paarvaila ulla vithyasam nalla theriyudhu...) to chevy... best wishes for your future life in writers world... have a nice day...
thank you ...
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9th December 2006, 11:30 AM
#13
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Originally Posted by
ramky
chevy : nice going
. ur writing from a boy's perspective shows ur perceptiveness too
Thanks
tho i havnt travelled much in these routes, what u hv written applies for many routes in chennai. and
i can vouch that not all the males dangling from these buses do it just to impress the girls in them, its out of a sheer necessity to reach one's college or office or an important appointment on time.
i agree ramky.
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9th December 2006, 11:31 AM
#14
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Originally Posted by
Querida
Hey Chevy,
ok wow that was weird cause that whole rant about environmental issues is like the silent one that runs through my head...it is survival of the fittest..it's harder still when you realize that it is and well you ain't doing that well a job...anyways that moment with the blind woman and bus....so real!!! your character is not a hero....he's real, he thinks like a real person does...it's not cliched or ideal or even sensical but that is the best attempt to capture the everyday....uh yeah i should join your protagonist in rants eh? Except i would like to sit in the bus rather than hang from it :P
i want to know how a female protagonist would be under your guiding hand?
i need to think about that .... It was easy to think from mens' point of view as we see many playing spiderman on the city buses daily.......
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9th December 2006, 06:21 PM
#15
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wonderful chevy
Anbe Sivam
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9th December 2006, 06:41 PM
#16
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Originally Posted by
crazy
wonderful chevy
thanks!!
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