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A request to amateur composers who visit this page

Topic started by Vijay (@ 212.137.205.127) on Thu Nov 16 16:58:22 EST 2000.
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I'd like to request amateur composers who visit this page to tell me if they've uploaded any of their work onto the internet and if they have, please tell me where I can listen to it. Thank You.

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• From: UV (@ 134.113.203.137) on: Tue Mar 27 10:52:22 EST 2001
  
  Rjay
  I have mailed my new song to you.
  Let me know whether you recieved it.
  
  thanks
  UV
  
  
• From: UV (@ 134.113.203.137) on: Tue Mar 27 12:31:00 EST 2001
  
  Rjay what is your email id?
  I know this is not the right forum but a flash news
  Actor/Villain Mansoor is be jugdged guilty in the rape case and is to serve 7yrs of RI.
  Another actor Pandian escaped that time
  
  
• From: rjay (@ 209.166.172.34) on: Wed Mar 28 11:30:32 EST 2001
  
  UV,
  
  I listened to your compositions and have sent you reply. Pl check mail box.
  
  RJAY
  
  
• From: comment (@ 63.226.195.142) on: Wed Mar 28 12:27:51 EST 2001
  
  other I am very sorry ,
  rjay,
  i am moving to pittsburgh this weekend , call my cell.
  
  
• From: UV (@ 134.113.201.48) on: Wed Mar 28 12:47:59 EST 2001
  
  Thanks Rjay for your valuable comments.
  I would like to share this 'Wild' and 'Serene' song with our friends here.
  Esp. Pros like Naveen,Swamiji,Comment can help me to improve myself.
  You can listen to them at https://www.idrive.com/dganesh/shared .
  I have also added new mood music composition 'Nomads'.
  thanks for listening and sharing ur suggestions
  (I still use my pc midi keyboard :( )
  
  
• From: Aditya (@ 160.231.1.110) on: Wed Mar 28 12:56:00 EST 2001
  
  Comment:
  
  Welcome to Pittsburgh - You're not very far from detroit. Hope to meet you soon.
  
  Regards,
  Aditya
  
  
• From: rjay (@ 209.166.172.34) on: Wed Mar 28 15:05:50 EST 2001
  
  others
  sorry.
  
  comment
  What a pleasant surprise!
  That is the greatest news I have heard recently. can you email me your cell to rjaymidi@yahoo.com
  rjay
  
  
• From: Swamiji (@ 198.102.112.201) on: Wed Mar 28 16:13:08 EST 2001
  
  Comment,
  That is not so good news for us here! Now I have to come all the way to Pittsburgh to see you gadgets. Anyways, wish you all the best. And do keep in touch!
  
  
• From: UV (@ 134.113.201.48) on: Wed Mar 28 16:53:06 EST 2001
  
  Comment
  I live in DC its only around 4hrs drive from Pittsburgh so you are welcome anytime to DC.
  
  
• From: Swamiji (@ 198.102.112.201) on: Thu Mar 29 14:42:12 EST 2001
  
  ***REPOST
  
  I am writing this by ear. Please correct if you hear anything dissonant!
  
  Flute intro |Cm|Gm|Ab|Ab Bb| x2
  |Cm|Bb|Gm|Bb|
  |Cm|Gm|Ab|G5|
  
  Cm
  vaseegara en nenjinikka un ponmadiyil thoonginaal
  podhum
  Cm
  adhey ganam en kannuranga mun jenmangalin yaekkangal
  theerum
  Cm Bb* Fm6 Cm/G Bb/D
  naan naesippadhum swasippadhum un dhayavaal thaane
  
  Cm Bb* Fm6 Cm/G Bb/D
  yaengukiraen thoongukiraen un ninaivaal naanethaan
  
  Flute - same as before
  
  Cm Cm
  adai mazhai varum adhil nanaivoame
  Gm7 Gm7
  kulir kaichaloadu sneham
  Fm Eb Eb.G7
  oru poarvaikkul iru thookkam
  Cm Cm
  kulu kulu poigal solli ennai velvaai
  Gm7 Gm7
  adhu therindhum kooda anbe
  Fm Eb Eb7
  manam adhaiye thaan edhirpaarkkum
  
  Cm Gm
  engaeyum poagaamal
  Ab Bb
  thinam veettilaeye nee vaendum
  Cm Bb
  sila samayam vilayaattai
  Ab G5
  un aadaikkulley naan vaendum
  
  (vaseegara)
  
  * no chord heard, just the bass note
  G/D is chord G with bass note D
  
  
  
• From: Suresh Shrinivas (@ ) on: Wed Apr 11 00:19:53 EDT 2001
  
  Folks,
  
  There is this new movie called matrimonials.com. an independent movie in mini DV format(at the moment) that was made by a couple of my friends. I have scored the background score for this movie. I visit newtfmpage regularly and would like you to listen to the tunes and if possible send me your feedback at sureshshrinivas@hotmail.com.
  You can find the music at www.mp3.com/suresh_shrinivas.
  
  Hope you like it,
  
  Suresh
  
  
• From: Naveen (@ 204.255.14.188) on: Wed Apr 11 17:02:58 EDT 2001
  
  Listened to your compositions. Good Job.. keep up the good work.
  
  All the best for your future projects too.
  
  in anyway is that movie related to http://www.matrimonials.com
  website?
  
  
• From: Suresh Shrinivas (@ 64.167.23.34) on: Wed Apr 11 18:00:23 EDT 2001
  
  Naveen,
  
  Thanks for your encouragement.
  
  The movie was called matrimonials.com initially and was screened at the first internationaal digital film festival in New Delhi on the 29th of March.
  
  Actually I believe the movie name may be changed soon. It does not relate to the website apart from the fact that the topic of the movie is related to internet matrimonials.
  
  Suresh
  
  
• From: MS (@ 129.252.222.2) on: Wed Apr 11 19:42:02 EDT 2001
  
  Naveen:
  
  please send an e-mail. thx.
  
  
• From: MS (@ 129.252.222.2) on: Wed Apr 11 20:34:17 EDT 2001
  
  rjay and others:
  
  veLippadaiyaana comments ezudhalaamaa ? I mean, as constructive criticizm ? You all are talented people and hence I would like chip in a few naive comments which may help u in a minor way to polish your future endeavours, if allowed.
  
  
• From: Swamiji (@ 198.102.112.201) on: Wed Apr 11 21:37:00 EDT 2001
  
  Kandippa MS (not yet for me because I dont make music like others do:) )But we all would like to hear them !!
  
  
• From: Suresh Shrinivas (@ 64.167.23.34) on: Wed Apr 11 21:58:36 EDT 2001
  
  MS and others,
  
  Please feel free to write any comments you may have on this page.
  
  Suresh
  
  
  
• From: MS (@ 129.252.222.2) on: Thu Apr 12 01:16:07 EDT 2001
  
  hi folks,
  
  I assume Suresh's statement as one representing your music making community.
  
  rjay - I listened to your reggae in mohanam and train in appalachia.
  
  reggae in mohanam is imho a composition which u would do sitting up straight from the bed without much thinking. I have heard a lot of your samples earlier and u are capable of putting up a better one. The tune is highly predictable and falls exactly in the beat. My suggestion is that u may try the same raga but go for a
  
  (1) composition spanning atleast 2 full octaves with the swara pattern construction being more dificult to guess. In other words there needs to be a judicious mix of the upper and lower octave notes. In your present composition a particular octave's notes seem to line up. That would tell badly on the creativity. A good mix of the higher and lower octaves' swaras will allow you more room to innovate.
  
  (or)
  
  (2) a composition which goes to explore better rhythm structures in swaras. 1234 pattern itself can be twisted with some effort and thinking into better placement of swaras ( half beat, 3/4 beat etc...)...the tune is partly predictable because of the repeated usage of he same beat structure. It renders it a bit insipid.
  
  (or)
  
  (3) orchestration based. u can try to sit and think of adding more accompanying tunes and a better bass structure.
  
  Train in appalachia !
  
  NICE ! I liked it but a few observations regarding that too:
  
  (1) usage of orchestral hits is jarring ! try a different instrument say a sustained electric guitar as used in Mustafa.
  
  (2) the immediate soft guitar background that erupts after the finish of orchestral hits, is very much similar to IR's "kaNNan vandhu aadugindraan" :-) I know it is impossible to elminate the elements that we imbibe from the Maestro, but I am sure u are capable of making it better !
  
  suresh - Is there a way I can listen to yours ?
  
  Guys - this is not a loudmouth's bashing. Just purely my humble observations.
  
  
• From: Suresh Shrinivas (@ 66.74.57.152) on: Thu Apr 12 05:07:28 EDT 2001
  
  MS,
  
  The music is at www.mp3.com/suresh_shrinivas. A couple more versions of the Long Distance Romance tune will be available by about the beginning of next week.
  
  
  
• From: aruLaracan (@ 134.124.160.10) on: Thu Apr 12 11:18:06 EDT 2001
  
  MS: where is the mOhanam in reggae? can you provide the link please.
  
  
• From: UV (@ 134.113.203.137) on: Thu Apr 12 12:53:31 EDT 2001
  
  Guys
  Please do visit my mp3 site and let me know your valuable feedback
  http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/235/premadona.html
  I have recently composed 3 new songs but they are around 3-5mb each so if any of you have a T1 connection and is kind of enough to review my songs I will appreicated
  
  thanks
  
  
• From: rjay (@ 209.166.172.34) on: Thu Apr 12 14:23:03 EDT 2001
  
  Arul
  
  Reggae in Mohanam is my latest release at
  http://www.mp3.com/rjay.
  
  MS
  That is the kind of criticism that helps us
  grow. Thanks a lot for taking the time to listen
  and write this. Please continue this.
  
  Reg your comments on Reggae:
  1. I will try to experiment more on the
  Octave choice and also the melody-rhythm.
  There is also another reason why these
  problems came up. I wrote the lyrics for
  this song first and tuned it to be sung
  by lead man and his group. The ideas dictated the lyrics to me and the lyrics dictated the melody-phrase rhythms. I tried to keep the
  melody line very simple and it became very simple!!! :o
  
  The vocal
  version (I am working on it) might
  be better. I realize it was not a good
  idea to release the instrumental version.
  I will try to improve the orchestration too.
  2. Train in appalachia:
  I think you have commented on
  "Horror and Healing". The Orchestral
  hit is supposed to be jarring ;)
  
  Try listening to Appalachia. Your review comments are welcome in this thread.
  
  Thanks
  RJAY
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: MM (@ 208.184.25.41) on: Thu Apr 12 14:57:32 EDT 2001
  
  I am MM(moolai mazhungi) enakku moolaiyae illai.
  So UV ennala unnutha review panna koo..
  
  

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