Topic started by Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217) on Thu Jul 23 21:34:25 EDT 1998.
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For a good understanding of how to approach this ongoing symposium, please refer to the thread, "Kannadhaasan Vs. Vairamuthu TFM Symposium Topic 1:Iyarkai Varnanai" before you post. Let me reiterate that this is not a patti mandram, but
a research symposium.
Please show TFM examples of both poets with regards to just theirVaarththai Prayoagam for this thread. By vaarththai prayoagam, we mean captivating use of language, word play, different use of a known word, vocabulary, etc. Please provide the name of the song whose lines you excerpt and the name of the movie if known.
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- From: Prakash Balakrishnan (@ gate5.ca.us.ibm.com)
on: Wed Jul 29 16:30:45 EDT 1998
Radha Sanjay,
I think
thaamaraik kannangaL, thEn malar kiNNangaL.. is by Vaali from the film (if I am correct) Edhir N-eechal.
Ramki, Pagalavan, Udhaya can you confirm this???
- From: Pagalavan (@ bbn-cache-3.cisco.com)
on: Wed Jul 29 17:21:38 EDT 1998
Prakash Balakrishnan
Yes, you are right about thAmaraik kannangaL. Its by vAli and its from ethir nEEchchal
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Wed Jul 29 17:50:18 EDT 1998
elumbarae,
I agree with all your selections except the one under Yo_Yo_pattu where you have given the classic song from Nenjil Or Aalayam. This song is not quite a good example of word play because it is just rhyming. This is undoubtedly a great song though, maybe you should use it for the "situational songs" topic where it will be more appropriate. Just a thought, what do others think about this?
I would like to stress again that this thread is to show unique play on words, language, vocabulary , etc.
- From: Pagalavan (@ bbn-cache-3.cisco.com)
on: Wed Jul 29 19:30:13 EDT 1998
Some more lines of VM that we can appreciate for the choice of words that add to the kavinayam are:
muththam tharum EEram pathinthirukkum..
mullai iLam pOOveduththu mugamthudaikkum..
:
:
bOthai koNdu pOO azhaikka
thEdi vanthu thEn edukka.. (song : "isai mEdaiyil..intha vELaiyil..")
In another song (Ayiram thAmarai mottukkaLE), VM has used the following lines in silEdai (the first line, I think) :
ingu reNdu jAthi malligai
pOttukkoLLum kAthal paNdigai
kOvilil kAthal thozhigai
He also adds another description of the lovers in the same song as :
pulveLiyin mEEthu reNdu pOOmAlai
onRai onRu sOOdum ithu ponvELai..
Needless to say the line adikkadi thAgam vanthu ALaik kudikkum too is rich in kavinayam
Description of lovers who separate and rejoin is very nice in the lines:
jOdi nathigaL pAthai vilagich sErnthana
kathai pEsina..
iru karai muzhuthum ini malar vaLarum..
I have always liked the way VM described about a muthal iravu in a different style:
muthan muthalAp pArkkumpOthu
achchamAga irukkum.. AnA
vidinja piRagu viLakkil eNNai
michchamAga irukkum (song : "ALAnAlum ALu..")
In another song, VM describes about munthAnaich siRai mostly suited to the situation, I think:
adadA munthAnai siRaiyAnathu
athuvE envAzhvin muRaiyAnathu..
pARai onRin mElE - oru
pOOvAy muLaiththAyE
uRavukku uyirthanthAyE..
Few other lines of VM which have the good impact due to choice of words are:
pOOvE..iLaiya pOOvE
varamtharum vasanthamE
:
:
kuzhal vaLarnthu alaiyAnathE
iravugaLin izaiyAnathE..
un vAsalil ennaik kOlamidu
illai enRAl oru sAbamidu.. (song : "EEramAna rOjAvE..")
thEnE
kangaikku Enintha thAgam?
nathigaL virainthAl kadalum vazhividum.. (song : "pAda vanthathOr..")
pAthai thadumARum
ithu bOthai mazhaiyAgum
munthAnai vAsam EthO sugam.. (song : "pOOvAdaikkARRu..")
alaiyil mithakkum mAthuLai
ivaL brammadEvan sAthanai.. (song : "nathiyil Adum..")
More later..
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Wed Jul 29 20:06:39 EDT 1998
Song: hai rabba; Film: Jeans
VM sees flowers as standing on one leg , as in "ottraik kaal thavam" to reach her beautiful hair:
ottraikkaalilae pookkal nirppathu
un koondhalil nindraadaththaan
Song: Chandhiranai: Film: Ratchagan
In this song VM shows the difference in the awareness of lovers brought on by love:
pookkalai sedi kodiyin porul
endru ninathirundhaen
poovai unnaip parthapinnae
pookkalin mozhi arindhaen
thalaiyanai enbathu
thalaikkendru ninaithirundhaen
thalaivanai pirindhapinnae
thaliyanai thunai arindhaen
in this following stanza he shows the transformation of the lovers' personality since they found love
theeppantham pondravan naan
theebamaai aagivittaen
puyalukku pirandhaval naan
thendral endru aagivittaen
karungallaip poandravan naan
karpooram aagivittaen
thaamarai malar kondu
udal seitha oaviyamae
ennudal baaram mattum
eppadi thaangukiraai?
the following lines do a nice update on the proverb, "kodikku kai baarama"
meengalaich chumappathondrum
neerukku baaramillai
kadhalaich chumakkayilae
kaadhalanum baaramillai
. . .
sorgaththirkku vandhu vittoam
tharkkaththirku naeramillai
tharkkaththirku a rarely used word also fits as a nice rhyme to sorgaththirkku
Song: nenjae nenjae; Film: Ratchagan
These lines are spoken by a woman to console her lover that their separation isn't permanent.
Here VM uses a superb imagery where he sees sunset as a seed going down and sunrise as the blossom:
asthamanam ellam
nirandharam alla
maerkkil vidhaithaal
kizhakkil mulaikkum
- From: Udhaya (@ 205.218.142.217)
on: Wed Jul 29 21:36:37 EDT 1998
Song: oru naal; Film: Andhimanthaarai
Notice the simple language used by VM to show a villager's sentiment about fate:
Kaaviri nadhiyum
rendaagak koodum
kollidam vandhu
onnaagach chaerum
kaalaththin kanakkai
yaar kaanak koodum
. . .
the following lines describe the aging body and the ageless love:
neendamudi konjam
niram maarippoachchu
sanguk kuzhiyodu
kural maarippoachchu
koadi vayasachchu
uru maarippoachchu
ninappathu mattum thanae
maaraama irukku
In these following lines from the same song, VM shows the devotion and depth of a peasant woman's love for her man:
ennachchuththi oru koottam
sirikkindra poadhum
unnappaththi en uthadu
oayaamap paesum
kaaththu mazhai ethanaalum
karaiyaathu paasam
kattaiyilum vaegaathu
kai thotta vaasam
Song: sakiyae; Film: Andhimandhaarai
I debated long whether to save this for the "samuthaaya seerthiruththa/puratchi paadalgal" topic for which this is perfectly suited, but the expert build up of logic in the use of words creeps up on the listener to a great effect in each stanza that I had to include it here:
boomiyaik kaetta vaanmugil thoovum
pookkalaik kaetta vandugal paadum
veethiyaik kaetta thendralum veesum
saathiyaik kaetta kaadhalum thondrum
kaadhalin raajjiyaththil visiththira vazhakkam
kangalai vaangikkondu idhayaththai kodukkum
oarvizhip paarvai uyiraiyum edukkum
maruvizhip paarvai uyiraiyum kodukkum
iru viral theendinaal saathiyum thadukkum
idhayaththaith theendinaal edhu nammaith thadukkum
- From: Sriram Lakshman (@ sf-dnpqd-022.compuserve.net)
on: Wed Jul 29 23:12:10 EDT 1998
Hi Guys!!
Have you heard this song written by KD,
Oru poojyathukkulle rajiyathai aandukondu puriyamale iruppaan oruvan
avanai purinthu kondal avanthan iraivan
Mutrum kasanthathu endru patraruthu nirkum pothu
sutram ena nindriruppaan oruvan
avanai thodarnthu sendral avan than iraivan
Beautiful usage of words. Any idea which movie this is from and who scored the music ?
- From: Only_One (@ bones.deneb.com)
on: Thu Jul 30 01:17:09 EDT 1998
Sriram Lakshman:
poojiyam song is from vaLar piRai
MD ???
Udhaya:
"situational songs" topic ???? I didn't know
such a topic is coming to this symposiyum!!!
About the YO-YO pAttu - I liked the first 4 lines
I posted which refered "param poruL" for GOD (??)
and "paRavai" for UYIR - then I continued the
songs for the rhyming.
Pagalavan:
About "pAl thamiz pAl" from Ragasiya Police 115
I am not very sure - but me & annAr feel it is
by Kannadasan (enna ithu MGR padam enbathAl
konjam Udhaya-kithu...oops udhaikithu)
Topic:
lovers ellAm SRI RAMANA - oruvanukku oruthi -
endRu irukkanum endRu solli azugirAl ivaL....
iravukku 1000m kaNgaL
pagalukku ondRE ondRu
(pagalava! nee illaiDA)
aRivukku 1000m kaNgaL
uRavukku ondRE ondRu
kaNakkil kaNgaL iraNdu - avai
kANum kAtchi ondRE ondRu
- From: Udhaya (@ host16.globalcenter.net)
on: Thu Jul 30 02:21:44 EDT 1998
bones, you raised a good point about not knowing about other topics in the symposium. I just assumed that everybody knew this. The ten topics for the symposium were lined out in the first topic. Let me post it here again for those who join us in the middle of the symposium. I will remember to post it in all future topic threads as well.
Here are the categories to judge both poets by giving examples of lyrics they wrote for TFM:
1)Iyarkai Varnanai
2)Kaadhal Paadalgal
3)Thaththuva Paadalgal
4)Vaarthai Prayoagam
5)Nagaichchuvai Paadalgal
6)Samudhaaya Seerthirutha / Puratchi Paadalgal
7)Vingyaana/Naveena Karuthoottum Paadalgal
8)Ilakkiya Moolam Ulla Paadalgal
9)Kadhaikku Porundhiya Paadalgal(situational songs)
10)Kavidhai Milekarkal (Poetic Milestones that the poets will be remembered by!)
- From: anbu_nA_innAbA (@ bones.deneb.com)
on: Thu Jul 30 03:15:23 EDT 1998
KaNNadAsan describes about LOVE - not the kAdhal
(for a change!!!)
madhathin meethu vaiththa ANBU bakthi Anathu
manithan meethu vaiththa ANBU pAsam Anathu
idhayam meethu vaiththa ANBU uNmai Anathu
Ezai meethu vaiththa ANBU karuNai Anathu
the same song continues to...
aRivu illAtha manithar uLLam aruL illAthathu
aruL illAtha manithar uLLam panivu illAthathu
paNivu illAtha manithar uLLam paNbu illAthathu
paNbu illAtha manithar uLLam anbu illAthathu
padam: Asai alaigaL pAttu: anbu enbathE theivamAnathu..
- From: Arvind (@ webgate0.mot.com)
on: Thu Jul 30 08:07:52 EDT 1998
Here are some examples of VM's word play -
In the song Pani vizhum malarvanam from NinaivellAm nithyA, he writes thus :
Pani vizhum malarvanam
Un pArvai oru varam
Ini varum munivarum
ThadumAdum kani maram...
Note how VM combines the two words ini varum munivarum to describe the beauty of the malarvanam .
Here is another example of vArthai prayOgam :
In this song from SippikkuL muthu :
... idhazhil thodangu
enakkuL adangu
sugangaL iRu madangu...
The words thodangu and adangu , which instruct the beloved to derive pleasure, have been beautifully woven with madangu to convey the sensuousness of the theme.
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